Wednesday, September 9, 2009
Blog about a Blogger
Wesley Fryer is a educational blogger that blogs about all of the technology that he and his students bring to the classroom. He talks about the new abilites the new technologies that are coming up will effect the stuff that occurs in his classroom. His main point is that technology can be used in the classroom in an efficient manner such that it brings the student a better understanding of the subject. He also talks about what ways you can use a old technology in a classroom so that it is not the same and old way. In one of his blog postings he actually talks about a youtube video his daughter had created in class. This is a very good use of a technology in the world today it makes the classroom meet the Web.
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You have made it apparent that you "get" Wes Fryer. Your description of what he does and what his beliefs are is accurate.
ReplyDelete3/4 due to mechanics of writing:
1. "a educational blogger that blogs" should be 2. "an educational blogger who blogs"
3. "abilites" should be "abilities"
4. "He talks about the new abilites the new technologies that are coming up will effect the stuff that occurs in his classroom." is awkward. "new technologies that are coming up" is redundant. If they're new, they're coming up. Try something like: "He describes how new technologies will impact what occurs in his classroom."
5. "a old technology" should be "an old technology"
6. "the same and old way." should be "the same old way."
7. "in the world today it makes the classroom meet the Web." needs punctuation between today and it. Maybe "in the world today; it makes the classroom meet the Web." or maybe "in the world today--it makes the classroom meet the Web." depending on what you are trying to say.